Sonnet

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This month’s sonnet is a reimagining of a song that reached the top ten twice: once when released by a Motown girl group in the 1960s, and again in the 1980s when it was released as a synth pop track by a British singer. The lyrics tell the story of a woman whose lover is doing what’s now called ‘bread-crumbing’… giving her just enough attention to stop her giving up and moving on.

Relinquish me

Relinquish me, belovèd, set me free
Release me from thy heedless grip, I pray!
I know now what thou lovest: ‘tis not me.
‘Tis eking out enough to make me stay. 

Thy visits are a litany of pain
In which a toy thou makest of my heart.
Begone, I say, and let me heal again
as thou hast healed. My life would I restart.

 “Though parted we are now”, quoth thou, “I hope
A friendship we can cultivate instead.”
This cannot be. My heart would never cope.
I cannot overrule it with my head. 

If freedom is thy craving, let me go!
My heart upon another I’ll bestow.

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The song is ‘You Keep Me Hangin’ On’, by the Supremes, and later re-released by Kim Wilde

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